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Look at the following story from Hampshire Police

·      What are the 5 W’s ?

Who, why, when, what, where 

·      Is any part of this story opinion?

There is no distinct opinion although the quote may influence the story one as it is partial to the police, it has a balanced view. 

·      Write this story into a piece of copy as close to 90 words long as possible, aiming to use the 3 C’s and 5 W’s

An investigation has started after a group of boys assulted a 25-year-old women with learning difficulties. The incident took place on christmas day when the young women with a rare genetic condition called Williams syndrome was walking along St Andrews Road.

Here the women and her following cat were verbally assulted and threated before being beaton.

A Hampshire costabulary spokeman has stated that the only reason for this attack was because of the womens appereace. They are currently appealing for any whitnesses to this assult to come forward. They are also hoping for any information about the identities of the youth suspects. To report any information the line is open on the normal 101 system.  

Police are investigating a report of an assault on a woman with learning difficulties in Southsea on Christmas Day.

The 25-year-old, who has a rare genetic condition called Williams syndrome, was walking along St. Andrews Road near Hudson Road at around 5.20pm on Sunday, December 25, 2011 when she was approached by a group of boys.

It’s alleged the boys verbally abused and threatened her before assaulting this woman and her pet cat, which was following her.

The woman received slight bruising to her face, and was left frightened and distressed by these events. She went back to her flat and locked herself in shortly after the assault, which was later reported to the police by her family.

The group of boys were described as being aged between 12 and 15. They were riding a number of micro-scooters and one bicycle. One of the boys was wearing blue jeans and a blue top with the hood up.

A Hampshire Constabulary spokesman said: "These were cruel and despicable actions towards a vulnerable woman who is usually trusting of people as she tries to lead an independent life.

"On Christmas Day evening, this woman wanted to prove her independence by walking from her flat to her mother’s address nearby for the first time in the dark. It’s believed that the group of boys targeted this woman because of her appearance and the way she walks, which is as a result of challenges with her co-ordination.

"We are appealing for witnesses to this assault in St. Andrews Road on Christmas Day or anyone with information about the identities of the youth suspects."

People with information are asked to contact Southsea police station by phoning 101. Mini-com users can phone 01962 875000. Information can be given anonymously by phoning the independent Crimestoppers charity on 0800 555 111.